Poem Review (based on book)?

its amazing and well written. Some words though may be harder for some to understand, so this would be for a much older audence, which is a pity because kids my age (fourteen) SHOULD know this but since very few people read outside of facebook they wont see the depth of the words. Its very good though and i injoyed reading it partly because it is raw and full of emotion still like most poems are before we go through them a million times re-writing and fixing untill its "perfect"