Thursday, August 11, 2011

What do you think of this chapter so far?

It's got a very nice tone and rhythm to it, which pays enough attention to the background to provide a nice, easily managed setting for the reader. It also adds a very nice pace to the dialogue, giving the characters enough space to present themselves, push the plot line and underline their intentions. Basically, I can read it without getting bored, but I personally think it could do with more zombies.

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